I have one specific section in my book where a Professor is giving a lengthy explanation on a subject. Normally, I don't have a problem with breaking up long sections of text by having other characters chime in. However, in this particular instance, that doesn't quite work.
The general structure I have been following is that if it's the same character talking, I do not break up the lines into multiple paragraphs. But in this case, does it make sense to do so? When interspersing the dialogue...
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The general structure I have been following is that if it's the same character talking, I do not break up the lines into multiple paragraphs. But in this case, does it make sense to do so? When interspersing the dialogue...
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